Writing marketing blurb without faking it 2

Posted by Pelle Tue, 29 Nov 2005 05:43:56 GMT

As you might have seen I tend to write in a very rambling mode, with probably one too many semantical and grammatical errors. Now is the time to tighten up the front page of WideWord to help sell the service. I need it to show some of the main features without being pretentious and fake in the typical marketing style.

So I’ve made my first attempt and put it live. I would really appreciate comments either here or privately to pelle@neubia.com. I received lots of great feed back on the WideWord User Agreement which really helped me out.

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    Justin Tue Nov 29 20:35:07 +0000 2005

    Dont have time to go through it all, but heres one thing.

    I don’t want to have to trust my email service provider so don’t send me a copy of the access url by email. I will bookmark it myself. I acknowledge that if I loose this URL I also loose access to my document.

    Should be lose, one o :)

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    Pelle Wed Nov 30 02:54:56 +0000 2005

    Thanks Justin. That seems to be one of my standard orthographical errors. Fixed now.

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